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Oct 18, 2011
your poem
by: Janelle

Dawn,

This is beautiful. Thanks for sharing. You so clearly portray your sense of emotions and struggle with this loss. And yet you have hope. I imagine that hope often gives you courage on the most difficult days.

Keeping holding on to hope!

Janelle

Apr 27, 2011
Your words of kindness means alot thank-you
by: Dawn

Thank-You Janelle, as time goes on the grieving process gets easier,you just have to learn to accept and live with your loss but always remember them,it is and has been a hard rollercoaster ride of emotions (my poetry helps me express my feelings aswell as releasing them)It has been a pleasure to share my poetry and I hope they have been a little bit of comfort to others.I think hope is important to hold on-to sometimes and also to appreciate the important things in life like the loved ones you have around you,losing a loved one certainly changes your whole outlook on life in general I think.
My Kindest Regards
And Thank-You once again.
Dawn

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