let it begins!

by Reanetse motloli
(friendship Town (city))

This feeling is within me each and every day and night. Am living like a slave of pain and formidable should i blame my creator? should i blame my mind or my feelings. why are you giving me something that doesn't belong to me? do i deserve to be like this am safaring emotional and physically my heart is bleeding with blood........... crying each and everyday hoping to find the way am loosing my self . loneliness role my life, should i search for love or peace i turn to be loosing my temper.


Where these beginning these no end ........i dreamed about it i wish i could reach my dream . let it be like that let me know the truth .I cant smell death my dad past away he leaves me in a strange world suffering with no food and hope of living ........... my feeling are deep and my mind has full of ballad the words of temptation and difficulties run through my brain hoping that i will find the way . living in this house where these no peace .


I've DECIDED TO COMMIT SUICIDE BUT I DIDN'T SUCCEED.............WHAT AN EXPERIENCE ?...........AM ENTERING THE REALLY WORLD AM LIVING IN A SECOND CHANCE WHERE THERE ARE CHALLENGES I WISH I COULD TURN BACK TO MY EARLY AGE......

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Aug 06, 2013
 journey
by: sbonelo.B

Too emotional and touching but I can tell you this: its not that every bad situation that you come accross is here to distroy you, but its up to you as an individual whether you want to come out as a victim or victorious and lastly sometimes it takes pain to make us appreciate all the little good things that we have. So take this as a test and do your best, success is just around the corner.
Jun 11, 2013
 Let it begings
by: Anonymous

i would like to read next chapter of the story it sound very interesting.Thanks for sharing.
May 16, 2013
 Let it begins
by: Anonymous

To emotional but i enjoyed reading it.
Feb 23, 2013
 Let it begins
by: Anonymous

Great piece of work
Sep 11, 2012
 NICE
by: Sbonelo.B

Very tOuching and briliant, i cant wait for the next chapter
Well done.
Nov 25, 2010
 your are not your situation
by: Ogodiseng

environment everything but heredity nothing only your can change your situation don't live in fears but but try the things that you think you cant do.thoughts are like that surround you like a crowd wen you are alone

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